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#1 Smiley the Joker

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Posted 06 March 2010 - 03:39 PM

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Oh hey there guys, here's some of my previous work.

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#2 M.C MyZtery

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Posted 06 March 2010 - 04:50 PM

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these 2 are my faves.

Neat stuff ^^ .

can you take this pencil out of my eye now? ಠ_ಠ
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#3 Smiley the Joker

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Posted 06 March 2010 - 05:05 PM

Thanks bro. Sorry bout the pencil but it's far into yur head, you're kinda screwed now.

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#4 Cheshire

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Posted 06 March 2010 - 05:19 PM

I like these two the most:
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The cape/cloak/favorite curtain over the one shoulder, very classy. well done

when I saw that scene in the theater I couldn't believe it. Maybe it was just to badass
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Posted 06 March 2010 - 05:42 PM

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You nailed that heroic aura with these two, made them just for fun? or do you have a reason? Rose Wright? WTF?
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#6 pwnagekirby

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Posted 06 March 2010 - 06:20 PM

I just got really scared. Your Evil Leon seemed fair enough, but if this is what you're capable of...

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That's quite good!

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#7 Smiley the Joker

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Posted 06 March 2010 - 08:55 PM

You nailed that heroic aura with these two, made them just for fun? or do you have a reason? Rose Wright? WTF?

Oh ah umm....be distracted by this obese squirrel!
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#8 Smiley the Joker

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Posted 07 March 2010 - 03:26 PM

Hopefully the obese squirrel distracted you....you may see new mugs now.
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#9 Damon

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Posted 07 March 2010 - 03:31 PM

I think most of the newer ones are iffy. Like they could be better iffy. I like the first one, but there's just something wrong with him but I can't pick it out. 'tis buggin' me.

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Posted 07 March 2010 - 04:43 PM

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Posted 07 March 2010 - 06:53 PM

Hm... Not only did you throw out a bunch at a time, they all look sorta "UHHH" as if they'd just been pulled out of a rushed assembly line.

And what's with the first one's dual-colored armor?

That's quite good!

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#12 Smiley the Joker

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Posted 07 March 2010 - 10:04 PM

He has two different parts of the armor so two different colors.

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Posted 08 March 2010 - 04:36 AM

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besides his name being Doza Crowdwell, he also needs the bit of armor above his cape on our far left side removed, unless it is sticking through the cape?
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#14 Nitro

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Posted 08 March 2010 - 04:39 AM

It actually makes sense. Its like, over the armor, the cape. Technically, that would be kind of weird, but it does make sense.

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Posted 08 March 2010 - 04:48 AM

ah, it just looks very strange :rofl:
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#16 Smiley the Joker

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Posted 08 March 2010 - 08:38 PM

What Nitro said. And don't bother looking at the names...they mean nothing :shiftyninja:

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#17 SquareRootOfPi

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Posted 13 March 2010 - 04:29 AM

The first, third and fourth are the better ones of the group and don't have any exceptional errors.

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The hair needs some minor fixes as some parts don't quite make sense. This is noticeable in the top left where the two different spliced sources meet. The ear also does not look like an actual ear, you should either check a reference or other FE sprites. His neck also looks a bit large. The colors used on the scarf don't have enough contrast, make the dark shade darker and the light shade lighter, and consider using a third color to blend them in.

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You should either remove the eye entirely or uncover it, it doesn't look good otherwise. There's also a stray skin tone near the neck/scarf that shouldn't be there.

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The scarf has the same color problem as the first mug.

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Your use of dark colors makes it difficult to determine what the shading is. You should pick lighter colors for your lightest shades. His neck might also be a bit long.

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The purple tones stand out too much and are too saturated, and your red tones don't have much contrast. You also need to fix the right part of the collar, which is missing an outline.

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The second shade of red is too close to the lightest. Her chin is awkwardly formed, and her neck is misplaced on her body. You should move everything above the neck more to the right.

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Posted 13 March 2010 - 04:43 AM

go alucard!
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Posted 13 March 2010 - 07:12 PM

Well done I remember most of them. AS the other have said before, nice and excellent hair choices but your first looks great before having farther observation.
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#20 Smiley the Joker

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Posted 13 March 2010 - 10:28 PM

Hey thanks for the feedback dudes. Here's three more mugs for...er...a project.

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Nevermind. I got a better idea. not gonna use that spritefic

Edited by Smiley the Joker, 13 March 2010 - 11:22 PM.

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